I think that is much more effective now since you demonstrate how advanced you are! One small thing- the slide that talks about the Entrepreneurship class should probably say "interviewed BY the CFO" instead of "interviewed- the CFO".
Thank you very much for the feedback! I made this presentation in seventh grade, but you are correct: I need to put more information about my age and grade. I have changed that, and I warmly welcome any more feedback.
I like how the slides flow from seed to showing your growth. I think if you include your age and the grade you are supposed to be in, that will make more of an impact. One slide shows how advanced you currently are in math and science, while another slide states that you are in a class with 11th and 12th graders, but I think that knowing your age and the grade you are supposed to be in would be more effective.
Excellent! Although I know that you are very advanced, I expect that some people who view your Prezi won't realize that you are far ahead academically until they get to that element, several clicks in, on your Prezi.